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Hi

I'm unsure about this, it's kinda minimal with stuff coming in @ 3 minutes, not sure about snare and kick...
if you skip the first minute you missed nothing special maybe I should remove that? maybe I should begin at 2:30 and try to create 3 minutes from there?

https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/23-56-7-9-1-1-2-5-77-kk

messy with moog
https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/22-3-sl1

I think this has a nice sound but I don't know the genre industrial-downtempo-ish???
https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/56465456-sl1

this maybe gets intresting at @ 1:00 minute, the sound comes from massive vst ;)
maybe get's loud at one point,
https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/i-dont-know-what-im-doing

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THANKS GUYS!

I try to improve, I guess I need to take a course on beats to get further - bc sometimes I feel really dull,
I'm quite happy that in this times my stuff is still listenable, thanks alot yoo, I'm just getting used to ableton but until I can do what I expect gimme 20 years please...

I like your music. I think it needs to be more complicated and developed though. It needs highs and lows and to go somewhere and then come back. It needs to feel like you conjured something, and forced it from the bosom of your soul. Like from the afterbirth of you desire crawled a mutant beast of celestial quality spewing harmony and bliss from a cacophony of turmoil. The things you have going are nice though. I would maybe attempt to make your percussive elements more individual possibly. Just keep making things and the rest will come.

omg I loled at 0:00 with open windows! such a nice comment! I wanted to do this hiphop project too maybe I will learn something there lol
I need to improve, so I can atleast get the 'ground feeling for some certain things

thx for listening

*+ thx for advice!