David Peck - s k u l k i n g | s p e c i e s

https://soundcloud.com/davidpeck/s-k-u-l-k-i-n-g-s-p-e-c-i-e-s

like the concept and execution, but the bass needs to be deeper, rumblier, it needs to overwhelm a bit in this kind of music, imo

I can appreciate that, but as you can see the bass is already easily the loudest element in the track. Most of the high peaks are the bass notes.

Really like the work on this one. I like that you sort of found that sweet spot between noisey chaos and structure. The way it should be in my opinion.

  On 7/15/2013 at 1:19 AM, Deepex said:

I can appreciate that, but as you can see the bass is already easily the loudest element in the track. Most of the high peaks are the bass notes.

Yeah, the bass definitely needs to be deeper. Just make a classic sine wave sub bass and add a tiny bit cutoff to it, just to give the smooth sine wave a tiny bit of structure and edge which will then make it sound louder. That way you won't have to turn up the bass so loud for it to stand out :)

I usually accept feedback whether I agree with it or not, but this bass tone IS two sine waves, one peaking at less than 47hz. That's pretty deep in my opinion.

really like the work you've done. varied textures and a good and fixed mood. good attentions to structuring details. leaves a nice impression when over.