Smurtle

https://soundcloud.com/guidewire/smurtle

I can't stop listening to this track. I think it's got a good flow to it, but I would love some criticism so that I could maybe tighten it up a little bit. It feels a little like a cover band

hi, its nice, i would only do something with the main midrange synth...it needs more depth...maybe little bit reverb or chorus on it would do it..

ya... it is a little dry

bring a few elements back would be a good idea ;-)

What hanz said up there. Also, I think the snare or clap or whatever it is could maybe benefit from a shorter attack. A bit more snappy maybe. Melodies are pretty fun and so are the synths, though I think the main synth placed a bit weird in the mix. Also, as hanz said, a chorus effect or some more reverb would be good to create some space.

But it's still pretty nice.