the pit

Here's one I just started tonite, i like it so far....Im going to add much more and tweak it up some tomorrow, since I have the day off. Hopefully I can take in some thoughts/opinions/advice before the night ends. Thanks.

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So far it's a damn interesting track... i'm puzzled on the idea of adding more, seems complete to me. but maybe you'll suprise me. its a hauned track with dark purple depths.

Thanks for listening goffer, even if your the only one, oh well....

Anyway, I spent some time with it today and I think it might be done. This version makes the first one seem like a joke. :grin:

enjoy!

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the pit

In all honesty, I think this is a fucking wicked dance song. ok, Im going to get some beer.

Thanks for listening,.

You proved me wrong alright; it's a whole new track. i enjoyed the small build up at the beginning and this version seems to have more depth. It seemed to run a bit long towards the end and probably could ahve stopped at 4 minutes but i also have a bad habit of letting songs run on.

the pit:

good work here! pads'n'acid fits well together ;) curious end???

johnny acid:

lol! good work here! samples'n'acid fits VERY well together ;)

VERY IMPRESSIVE until 1:30 when the TB303 is alone the taste change radicaly: more basic , maybe more effective!

new1:

i simply don't like it, too far from total desctruction in a way

new2:

i really love the psychedelic lines, it's restful! :) but the drum are too loud and probably needs more breaks.

conclusion: Good Job :grin:

Goffer- your right, i need to come up with a way to end it. The reason the end drones on a little is becuase I kept getting inturupted toward the end, but yeah I'm gonna work on that. I'm glad you liked it.

Silencide- Thanks for the the comments, really glad you liked them. i'm not sure what you mean by "too far from total desctruction" though...and i agree, new#2 needs alot of work. Unfortulately i lost the original files of new#1 and new#2 when i restored my harddrive, which really sucks...

stay tuned if you liked these, theres more to come.

yeah the end of the pit builds up nicley as, not sure about the bass line at end. But there is a nice slow build up which i like

will def check out the rest

  jac y jwmper said:

yeah the end of the pit builds up nicley as, not sure about the bass line at end. But there is a nice slow build up which i like

 

will def check out the rest

the 303 line?