I Can Help You

https://soundcloud.com/lo_five/i-can-help-you

Any feedback appreciated folks.

really nice.

Thanks MC ;)

Really dig that ambient, low-key, chill feel of this track. Especially the very first part. Reminds me of driving through a city at night. I wasn't as sure about 1:25-2:00 though, that main punchy synth seems a bit too heavy somehow. Also, the drums get repetitive.

But really cool aesthetic here. Very relaxing tune.

cool song. Id verb those claps and make the kick deeper.

Yep, with you on all these points... The breaks need tidying up, and I think it needs a key change or some more adventurous chords too now, feels a bit too safe. Thanks for the useful feedback!

Changed a few bits and remixed it - sounds more chilled now and less fussy now:

https://soundcloud.com/lo_five/i-can-help-you

Definitely digging the part more that I didn't like as much on the last one. Especially around 1:43 when the other synth part comes in.

ah yeah this rocks, great improvements!

Thanks fellas