lithuanian song!

hey guys

here is my new song! and yes its lithuanian so you wont understand anything, but well, it should be funny for ya ;D

ok, here it is: http://download.yousendit.com/AEEDAAF4655EFA95

I like the rhythm. The melody and progressions/etc. are a little too conventional. The guitar's okay. The vocal is a little unbecoming.

It sounds a little too folky, but that's becuase I don't like folk.

Fun listen, anyway.

thanks ((;

what do others think about it?

Everything is very trite unless the tuning :laughing:

the good thing is not the Fun (because it's sound more sad than fun), but the quietness and the kitch style.

well, thanks for the criticism too (;