hokum Posted November 25, 2013 Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 Just the first run for this one. There's not much structure yet but once i listened for a while and forgot that it was playing .... Felt like id be a fun post for feedbacks. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/81386-nothing-juice-melodies-and-happy-beats/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest lwpss Posted November 25, 2013 Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 Those slightly detuned pads are absolutely lovely. Bitcrushed beats are nice as well. Good job :) Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/81386-nothing-juice-melodies-and-happy-beats/#findComment-2096646 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokum Posted November 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 Thanks lowpass. Since the post ive added a bit of new pads and a relaxed intro... should be a fun one Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/81386-nothing-juice-melodies-and-happy-beats/#findComment-2096676 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokum Posted November 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 Now that ive heard it in the car... the bass hits are too heavy and some of the sampled percussion is out of time more than a few hairs of acceptable groove. ... hmm Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/81386-nothing-juice-melodies-and-happy-beats/#findComment-2096708 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Sumbitches Posted December 2, 2013 Report Share Posted December 2, 2013 ^ That's just creator's perfectionism hehe, I reckon it sounds fine, didn't even notice any out-of-timeness and the hits seem fine, although in fairness I'm listening on shitty headphones. Really nice track though man, genuinely sounds like it could be a lost AFX number. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Leon Sumbitches's signature Hide all signatures Rain Over Mountain is out now; 100% of Bandcamp sales are donated to the Motor Neurone Disease Association: https://tanizaki.bandcamp.com/album/rain-over-mountain Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/81386-nothing-juice-melodies-and-happy-beats/#findComment-2099022 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokum Posted January 4, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2014 On 12/2/2013 at 2:43 AM, Leon Sumbitches said: ^ That's just creator's perfectionism hehe, I reckon it sounds fine, didn't even notice any out-of-timeness and the hits seem fine, although in fairness I'm listening on shitty headphones. Really nice track though man, genuinely sounds like it could be a lost AFX number. quite heavy praise... thanks Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/81386-nothing-juice-melodies-and-happy-beats/#findComment-2111669 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hermann Posted January 4, 2014 Report Share Posted January 4, 2014 He may have a point about creator´s perfectionist criticism. What may sound out of time for you (and what may in fact be), since you can see the whole "score" so to speak, could be what sets the groove perfectly for another listener. Not that I´m saying it is that way in this case, just thought I´d give you a heads up about the traps one call lay for oneself as a musician. I´ve been subject to it myself is why I´m telling you this, so I advise just trying not to focus on each aspect individually too much until you lose sign of the whole picture. Nice track by the way, love the contrast of the really fast paced clicky percussions to the overall laid back beat underneath it. And yeah, the bitcrushed percussions in the middle are nice. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/81386-nothing-juice-melodies-and-happy-beats/#findComment-2111824 Share on other sites More sharing options...
cruising for burgers Posted January 9, 2014 Report Share Posted January 9, 2014 (edited) lovely song, missing some strong bass notes imo, that is all. oh and yes, nothing is out of time from this perspective... Edited January 9, 2014 by THIS IS MICHAEL JACKSON Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide cruising for burgers's signature Hide all signatures https://www.instagram.com/ancestralwaves/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/81386-nothing-juice-melodies-and-happy-beats/#findComment-2113617 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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