A couple of new tunes...

Hi!

Just hoping to get some feedback on a couple new tracks, bit of a change of direction for me and would be interesting to see what peeps think :)

https://soundcloud.com/subsea/wel-wysh
https://soundcloud.com/subsea/archway

Cheers!
J

Wel Wysh: Really love the noise texture. Pads are unexpected but I would've love more coherence with the bass note, which shouldn't have remained the same all through IMO. Then it doesn't really develop, and focus gets lost.

Archway: Again I love the sound design in the beginning but it sounds overcompressed to me, especially when the muddy bass comes in. It seems like lacking development too, before the 2 minutes mark it could get more intense, with more textures, melodies or pads on top coming next, dunno.

Cheers!

Yeah maybe they need to develop a bit more, I was kinda just vibing on the loops when I made them originally :) I was originally making them for a live set, so maybe thats why they seem a bit open ended, but I think I will develop them for a release of some sort!