just made this

its meant to be driven the soundcloud encoder kills the crisp top end it sounds way better in wav format

any feed back appreciated all the best to u all. thanks for your help its been fantastic

https://soundcloud.com/thevco/trapped-under-ice

FWIW, I really dig this. Very nice.

this's the base. now start to work on it.

love the gritty sound, beat is banging, could use more variation, elements, maybe after a few minutes play the same plucky melody pattern using different sounds? Have chords contrasting it et cetera? Like Crivella said.

Beat is banging. Needs some funky ass bassline to underpin it plus other elements - fx, pads etc.