flash in the pan

see what u guys think to this thanks for your help its been great all the best to u all :) https://soundcloud.com/thevco/flash-in-the-pan

i think this might be a better cut?? https://soundcloud.com/thevco/flash-in-the-pan-the-b-side

sorry guys jumped the gun here is the final cut https://soundcloud.com/thevco/flash-in-the-pan-the-finial

my good friend thinks its boring?? no biggie i can bin it tomorrow........ lots more in the vault. was just an experiment what do u guys think??

Nice oldschool house stuff, properly done.

Really really enjoyed that! Just my kinda vibe. Chords were very nice. My criticism would be it taking too long to involve. Sort that out and you have a pretty perfect track. Best I've heard of yours!

Oh yeah also needs some strong hook/lead on top of the rest of the track just to top it off. Also really needs to be shortened as all the action happens in the last 2-3 minutes. Anyways enjoyed what you've done so far with this. Do more in this style please. :D

sweet good stuff u guys are the best acid is more my flavour but good to do things outside your comfort zone :)