GOOD BYE PORK PIE ?

hi all, hope the music is going well. i will tie time to check out your stuff too. thanks for taking the time to give feedback it always helps thanks :)

https://soundcloud.com/thevco/good-bye-pork-pie

Hello Hybernation. I really liked the break around 0:35 and that piano at 1:14. There is a good groove. I think it is a bit too long because it is always the same drum pattern with added or removed elements. Maybe making another pattern would help to keep the track interesting the whole time it is playing. The ending is strange, I wasn't expecting that but it works. That being said, I enjoyed it a lot.

thanks cool

The beat is nice. I think you can more instruments playing over it. Add a trumpet or sax solo? Maybe an organ? That way you can have different instruments "talking" over the beat which would make it more interesting relative to the length of the track you have now.

The ending guitar was really nice!