A newly formed mess

https://soundcloud.com/nowonos/refractionwork-in-progress

I like the vibe here. At first I thought the drums are way too in the background but actually it suits this kind of tune quite nicely. Sounds a bit formless and undefined but I don't know if that's actually a good thing. I like it.

Thanks for the feedback, it is quite messy structurally at the minute the mixing isn't far behind it either. Another one for the pile.

Whoa, I love that section starting around :30

And that second one starting at like 1:22, man

this is really good, as disorganized as it is, probably one of my favorite things I've seen on the YLC

That's quite the complement, thank you for listening!

This is pretty good as is. Maybe something to keep it fresh in the last section, touch up the mix. Nice though.

https://soundcloud.com/nowonos/refraction2

Did some tweaking and tidied a few bits up.

Tidied this up a bit a while ago, looking for fresh 'pinions as I might make another attempt to kick it off the pile. Cheers!

https://soundcloud.com/nowonos/refraction
*Sorry, forgot to add link!