melodic braindance WIP thing

yes so i dont do this kind of music very often so i thought i would share for your fine folks consideration. i'd say this tune is really just needing a bit more polishing till its done...

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9el54s78xoy5hym/wip5_17.mp3?dl=1

I feel that this track has some internal conflict. The melodic lead appears at first to be intended to be the primary interest - at least based on your post title, but the track quickly becomes a heavily textural thing with the actual melodic structure taking a back seat. Taken at face value I don't think the track itself is bad, but if your goal is to represent the braindance theme in melody then I would recommend trimming down the perc and pads, and giving greater focus and attention to the lead instruments. Apologies if I am misinterpreting your intentions.