Brendan Rincon - Sketch34_b

This is coming along very nicely. I've never really done anything in this style before, so this is new for me. I'd like to hear your thoughts on if it transitions well from the first part (before 4:12) to the second part (after 4:12).

https://soundcloud.com/brendyman/sketch34_b

Thoughts?

Good stuff. I think the transition sounds pretty smooth. It's good the way it is now IMO. The part after the transition sounds really nice. I'd actually prefer if the transition came earlier and the part after that was longer. The beginning sounded like it was building into something good and it was.. But the last part was just too short.

Maybe make the beginning to evolve a bit faster and make the ending part a bit longer and fuller?

Technically this sounds great and I liked everything I heard.