hoggy Posted June 11, 2014 Report Share Posted June 11, 2014 (edited) [sc5]153170692[/sc5] I'm pondering whether to make a 'mixed' version - like mixed in a DAW with dynamic variations in levels of layers and reverb and eq and stuff (changed the name to 'smelly mammal' but it's coming up as clingy still) Edited June 11, 2014 by hoggy Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide hoggy's signature Hide all signatures "Whoa! Check it out! RO-BIGH-DUHS!" sigh.. "That's Ribena.." Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAAAh Posted June 11, 2014 Report Share Posted June 11, 2014 This has really grown on me to the point that I would say this is my favourite piece of music of all time. You are a true master of what you do, with a unique and undeniable style. I'm astounded by the emotional and technical depth to this track, I'm discovering new layers of beauty with every listen. You have a bright future as one of londons most prolific and esoteric underground electronic music producers and I hope you don't shank yourself. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide AAAAh's signature Hide all signatures triachus yelling AAAA really straings the voice, and the tiny h really represents the struggle and hardship a vocal chord must endure for yelling AAAA http://i.imgur.com/jXQiEuU.jpg Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2175125 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoggy Posted June 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2014 thanks dude, emotional and technical depth was what I was going for =] glad you appreciate the layers of beauty too don't worry, I wont shank myself really Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide hoggy's signature Hide all signatures "Whoa! Check it out! RO-BIGH-DUHS!" sigh.. "That's Ribena.." Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2175129 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 13, 2014 Report Share Posted June 13, 2014 About a more processed, mixed version, I say go for it! Very dry at the moment, the fm work and wacky melodies reminds me of non serious Global Goon, minus the pro effects. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2175706 Share on other sites More sharing options...
th555 Posted June 13, 2014 Report Share Posted June 13, 2014 I can almost smell the mammal. Really nice work. I wouldn´t know about mixing this though, but I´d say keep it subtle, the way it is it already sounds pretty neat. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide th555's signature Hide all signatures https://www.youtube.com/user/THkaas/videos https://thisjepisje.bandcamp.com/ https://soundcloud.com/th555 Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2175801 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoggy Posted June 14, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2014 Thanks for the advice guys - the mix is actually finally starting to take shape - it's sounding really interesting I'm thinking I need to buy a small midi controller just so I can record me tweaking automation in real time for more human feeling (you know for the reverb mix level etc. so I can add details in real time) - just something with a single knob would do the trick Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide hoggy's signature Hide all signatures "Whoa! Check it out! RO-BIGH-DUHS!" sigh.. "That's Ribena.." Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2176279 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nil Posted June 14, 2014 Report Share Posted June 14, 2014 If that was my track, I'd play a lot with volulme, pan, reverb and delays, to create room and contrast between instruments. Not when mixing thought, but as part as the sound design/production. In my opinion, you have to create depth between the instruments, to draw focus on the most important bits and accordingly to put in the background the rest. Currently, it feels as if most melodies are squashed on the same wall instead of having their own place/room and breathing together. Don't be afraid to "sacrifice" some elements of your tracks by lowering their volume, or losing some hi-frequencies... I bet the whole tune will gain a lot with a more obvious take/bias on what to listen to. You can make it all happen before reaching for any EQ etc.... And I bet the tune will mix itself : if it all happens in the arrangement and sound-design/sound-selection, the mix gets way easier/quicker to get right. An arrangement (and consequently, a mix) has to create a hierarchy between its elements : to gain coherence, to emphasize a groove and to gain readability. Also, the drums are ways too low to my ears. I hope I don't sound harsh or negative by any mean, and I bet already know that all ! These are several tiny things I'd give a try if that was my tune. I hope it helps ! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Nil's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2176291 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoggy Posted June 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 I'm with you lin, I'll bear that in mind thanks Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide hoggy's signature Hide all signatures "Whoa! Check it out! RO-BIGH-DUHS!" sigh.. "That's Ribena.." Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2176355 Share on other sites More sharing options...
crx091081gb Posted June 15, 2014 Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 Have you thought about adding a slight shuffle groove to some of the sections to accentuate the changes between them better? Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide crx091081gb's signature Hide all signatures Recent tunes Reveal hidden contents https://soundcloud.com/crx091081gb/no-authority-without-hate https://soundcloud.com/crx091081gb/terminator-justice Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2176481 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoggy Posted June 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 That's a good idea, will try that thanks - now am working in FL can add more layers of percussion and stuff to emphasise the progressions. Thanks =] Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide hoggy's signature Hide all signatures "Whoa! Check it out! RO-BIGH-DUHS!" sigh.. "That's Ribena.." Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2176490 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thiefinger Posted June 15, 2014 Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 Funny stuff. Some parts sound like some background music from 90's pc games or something. Nice. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2176546 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoggy Posted June 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 It was made on a Sega Megadrive/Genesis tracker thief =] Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide hoggy's signature Hide all signatures "Whoa! Check it out! RO-BIGH-DUHS!" sigh.. "That's Ribena.." Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2176557 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thiefinger Posted June 15, 2014 Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 On 6/15/2014 at 6:13 PM, hoggy said: It was made on a Sega Megadrive/Genesis tracker thief =] Ooh. Nice. The sounds are really neat. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2176560 Share on other sites More sharing options...
lala Posted June 15, 2014 Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 quirky track :] Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide lala's signature Hide all signatures Beethoven, ages ago, said: To play a wrong note is insignificant. To play without passion is inexcusable Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/83749-maybe-finished-track-much-more-parts-than-last-time/#findComment-2176597 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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