Qatarsis - Evocative Voices

hey guys

would like to know what you think about my new track
i appreciate any kind of suggetsions, critics and feedback
hope you enjoy !

https://soundcloud.com/qatarsis/evocative-voices

cheers
qatarsis

  On 6/21/2014 at 12:50 PM, Qatarsis said:

hey guys

 

would like to know what you think about my new track

i appreciate any kind of suggetsions, critics and feedback

hope you enjoy !

 

https://soundcloud.com/qatarsis/evocative-voices

 

cheers

qatarsis

Nice one!

nice one, feeling the really smooth dubby vibe. the song structure's great.

i like the skittering percussions but i do feel the "snare" feels a little thin

cheers

thanks alot for your feedback guys :)
yeah, the snare really feels a little bit thin, heard that quite a few times now and i feel the same about it
will see if i'm going to change that soon, writing exams right now <.<

cheers

it's too clean souding. maybe you should try and sample some real instruments for the beats, sounds too thin overall imo. i've had this issue when only using clean samples for beats, but then i started sampling stuff and choping loops to sweet up the stuff. i call it cheating but hey, everyone cheats in this game...

apart from the beats the song has a really nice structure and the harmonic and melodic parts sound good and in context with the genre.

sorry if i don't have any positive and constructive feedback this time :(

Really liking your choice of low end instruments but maybe bring in more high end ones?