Sarputer

Here's a little track I made

https://soundcloud.com/th555/sarputer

Hmm. It doesn't feel quite done you know? The synth at 1:30 that's arping could use an accompaniment of some sort. I would also try to make some of your elements stand out more in some way. IT doesn't really matter which, but everything feels kind of flat. I'm also not really a fan of the detuning toward the end, it's a bit too over-powering. I think the problem may like in that it's very noisey. If the detuning was softer in some way that might work better. Basically, I would work to make the track feel more dynamic.

Thanks for the feedback :)

Curious track! The overall melody and feel are interesting. The arp is nice, I liked it. But I'm not sure about some of the sounds used. Some of the synth tones are detuned and/or too harsh for the track. I think the track has potential, but it needs more work to be considered finished.

Thanks :) I guess I should've tunes my synth before recording lol.