How is the melody?

Hello!

I made this melodic track that might need some softening on the synths or how to put it.

But regarding the melody, I have a question for watmm.

Is it very typical or predictive? Or is it wtf?

I think I usually make melodies like these, kind of simple ones.

But I would apreciate some fedback regarding the "chord progression" or what to call it.

Very greatful for some feedback!

https://soundcloud.com/unkorecords/onajs-onajs-theme

Very Plone-esque (if you've no idea what I'm talking about check this album: https://bleep.com/release/4279-plone-for-beginner-piano). Perhaps embrace the old school cheesiness in the mixdown by making the thing a bit more lo-fi. I think the only thing I'd change is the breakbeat - seems a little out of place, but apart from that: I like !

so so wicked trippy tune, i love it

you could maybe edit the breakbeat to put your own sounds on the hits? more unique sounds like fm squerps maybe?

I think my favourite part was when the breakbeat kicked in. Gotta be honest though I don't really think I was feeling the melody.

That's some quick responses.

As we say in Sweden "taste is like the ass cheeks, divided". I appreciate the feedback it a lot, thanks!

It's cool, my swedish asscritique would be that the rhythm of the melody is a tad boring, though it gets nicer towards the end.