Thiefinger Posted November 20, 2014 Report Share Posted November 20, 2014 Some ambient/dub/chill -type techno or whatever. I composed and arranged most of this on maschine but also did a lot of work later on cubase. https://soundcloud.com/thiefinger/thiefinger-cold Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/85778-cold/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted November 21, 2014 Report Share Posted November 21, 2014 I really like some of the sounds you use/created for the first 36 seconds of the track (the long rusty tone is a bit too loud though). But then out of nowhere the track changes style quite drastically. I'm not a big fan of the many changes throughout the track because it doesn't really fit in with the style the track starts out with. If I was you I would deconstruct the whole thing, find the part(s) you like the best and then build the whole track around that. Because right now the track just kinda switches between 4-5 styles without ever really going anywhere because there's no build-up. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/85778-cold/#findComment-2253349 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoggy Posted November 21, 2014 Report Share Posted November 21, 2014 actually kind of a detroit vibe excellently mixed I see what squee means about a lack of build up, but I don't think the tone is inconsistent. maybe you deliberately made a patchwork style composition? the whole build up style composition is a bit cliche isn't it, but on the other hand it can sort of work Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide hoggy's signature Hide all signatures "Whoa! Check it out! RO-BIGH-DUHS!" sigh.. "That's Ribena.." Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/85778-cold/#findComment-2253351 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted November 21, 2014 Report Share Posted November 21, 2014 On 11/21/2014 at 11:32 AM, hoggy said: the whole build up style composition is a bit cliche isn't it, but on the other hand it can sort of work I wouldn't say it's cliché... and as long as it works, it works. I've noticed a lot of people in the YLC do the complete opposite. Their tracks start out completely insane and then lose all energy after a minute or so because they can't top the insanity going on in the first part of their tracks. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/85778-cold/#findComment-2253357 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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