One day You Will Have To

Any thoughts on the composition of this one? It's been made on the iPad so I've yet to sort the sounds out - just the arrangement I'm not sure of...

https://soundcloud.com/lo_five/one-day-you-will-have-to

sounds like an old school pop/goth type thing except for the chord at 1:01 which makes a sudden change in tone

sounds like it needs vocals or sounds or something to give the emotion context I think, because it does sound like backing music at the moment, but then maybe when you've worked on the sounds, they will convey something more about the feeling

nice melody.

the drums sound like they need a bit more character, but you're going to sort that out anyway.

Cheers - yeah it feels a like a backing track to me too, hopefully making some interesting sounds will help...