solo piece

just playing along with the metronome late at night. thanks for any comments or just listening to.

http://soundcloud.com/smallsignalmusic/terminal-burrowing

A bit nekkid, the synth sounds pretty, the harmonies are nice, but the melody doesn't seem to be going anywhere, in my personal opinion.

Maybe try to recreate some parts, but develop it a bit, so it actually creates some momentum. A bit of reverb or delay could do wonders too, imo.

Good improvisation, though, keep it up.

If you had a tiny bit of saturation it'll be a bit easier to hear the tune on for instance a laptop...

thanks for helpful criticisms. as an aside i thought you might be interested in the inspiration.

http://www.livescience.com/41730-hypothermia-terminal-burrowing-paradoxical-undressing.html