Step Inside

What do you reckon to this? Added this ending on today after ages of not knowing what to do with it - which sounds cheesy as fuck, but I kind of like it:

https://soundcloud.com/lo_five/step-inside

Stepped inside, was not disappointed! Didn't think the ending was cheesy or out-of-place at all, flowed nicely

Nice one! Been over-thinking it probably.

Digging step inside. It's like I'm riding in a handicapped cart at a grocery store by myself after hours. Going up & down aisle after aisle. I stop in the canned goods aisle & peruse the soup cans. Lot of camera pans & wide angles. I continue on after making my choice & head down to the produce section to get some bread bowls. (about 3 :20 in the track) That's when I see "her". Soups on bitches.

I can really see it - that beautiful and serene picture you painted with your words. I hope it works out for you guys. I'm guessing you selected tomato and basil?

i wonder if the percussion could be slightly louder in the mix with just a touch of reverb to give it some texture? just an opinion. otherwise a nice listen.

  On 12/26/2014 at 11:24 PM, Electric Kitchen said:

i wonder if the percussion could be slightly louder in the mix with just a touch of reverb to give it some texture? just an opinion. otherwise a nice listen.

Cheers, yeah wasn't sure what to do with the drums tbh. Not even sure if acoustic drums were the way to go.

  On 12/23/2014 at 10:29 PM, westhead said:

I'm guessing you selected tomato and basil?

Naw, I'm an American dude. This:

Lol what the fucking hell mate, you guys are spoilt rotten

  On 1/5/2015 at 8:35 PM, westhead said:

Lol what the fucking hell mate, you guys are spoilt rotten

Yea, it's disgusting really, but I make no apologies.

Your track is stuck in my head btw.

thing: The chordal synth notation at 1:02 may be incorrect. Sounds like it's out of place. Doesn't seem to jive with the rest of the tunage. But that's me. carry on.

Yeah it's a bit of a random blues note I think, just to mix it up a bit, I thought it'd stop it being too repetitive but just seems to stick out and annoy people. Good it's stuck in your head though, I think.

  On 1/5/2015 at 8:47 PM, westhead said:

Good it's stuck in your head though, I think.

fo sure, whatever that sweep is that comes in @ 1min. & the end got me. I'm a sucka for that vibe. It's the glue.

some nice melodic bits in this, 80's vibes, I like that cat wailing synth slide section :)

  On 1/6/2015 at 2:51 AM, Djeroek said:

some nice melodic bits in this, 80's vibes, I like that cat wailing synth slide section :)

Cheers. That's actually a guitar riff I reversed then chopped up and loaded into a sampler.