lyst Posted March 21, 2015 Report Share Posted March 21, 2015 new single is here, mastered, and artwork done by the wonderful Victor Ferreira aka Sun Glitters. https://soundcloud.com/mylamine/mylamine-luminate Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide lyst's signature Hide all signatures my choons. Spotify Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/87096-luminate/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
lyst Posted March 24, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2015 Any feedback is better than nothing? I'll take hits if that's cool-for it being wack, lol. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide lyst's signature Hide all signatures my choons. Spotify Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/87096-luminate/#findComment-2306567 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goiter Sanchez Posted March 24, 2015 Report Share Posted March 24, 2015 Chill. The sidechained vocal sample near the beginning is really strange in an endearing way. Really nice piano melody around 0:48; phases around very nicely. Excellent cover art by Sun Glitters as per usual! Looks like a solid package you are offering up here! *bookmarks* Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Goiter Sanchez's signature Hide all signatures Soundcloud - http://soundcloud.com/swegunoFacebook - http://www.facebook.com/sweguno Mixcloud - https://www.mixcloud.com/Sweguno/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/87096-luminate/#findComment-2306682 Share on other sites More sharing options...
nickthefish Posted March 24, 2015 Report Share Posted March 24, 2015 I think it needs a donk on it. Critiquing isn't my bag/forte but here's my pinch of salt feedback after a couple of listens...dig the dreamy vibe, would like to hear a bit more of the vocal sample at the beginning referenced later, snare's a bit loud and kinda samey, bassline a bit quiet, track's lush sounding, song held my interest throughout, Bonobo-esque. Nice work. Gonna check out your other stuff now :) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/87096-luminate/#findComment-2306683 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mat Posted March 24, 2015 Report Share Posted March 24, 2015 Nice change @ :50. Made me sit up a bit. Very chill lounge vibe, I wish it challenged me a little more. I like how it starts kind of "bright" and turns a bit deeper, but it doesn't ever excite me. I too wish that vocal from the beginning played more of a part and developed more over the track. It seems like you were going for a very particular vibe though and I think you nailed it. It reminds me of eluvium with more percussion. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide mat's signature Hide all signatures https://soundcloud.com/lawrencelawrence Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/87096-luminate/#findComment-2306709 Share on other sites More sharing options...
lyst Posted March 25, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2015 (edited) On 3/24/2015 at 8:25 PM, Goiter Sanchez said: Chill. The sidechained vocal sample near the beginning is really strange in an endearing way. Really nice piano melody around 0:48; phases around very nicely. Excellent cover art by Sun Glitters as per usual! Looks like a solid package you are offering up here! *bookmarks* On 3/24/2015 at 8:26 PM, Dean Carbin said: I think it needs a donk on it. Critiquing isn't my bag/forte but here's my pinch of salt feedback after a couple of listens...dig the dreamy vibe, would like to hear a bit more of the vocal sample at the beginning referenced later, snare's a bit loud and kinda samey, bassline a bit quiet, track's lush sounding, song held my interest throughout, Bonobo-esque. Nice work. Gonna check out your other stuff now :) On 3/24/2015 at 9:20 PM, mat said: Nice change @ :50. Made me sit up a bit. Very chill lounge vibe, I wish it challenged me a little more. I like how it starts kind of "bright" and turns a bit deeper, but it doesn't ever excite me. I too wish that vocal from the beginning played more of a part and developed more over the track. It seems like you were going for a very particular vibe though and I think you nailed it. It reminds me of eluvium with more percussion. Thanks a lot for the feedback. Adding more vocal would have definitely brightened up some spots on the track, I would agree. Will keep that in mind next the next project. The cover art is indeed nice, it was interesting- Sun Glitters first gave me some rough drafts and ideas. I didn't quite love them, I was looking more for something like he uses for his own work. That's when he told me he has to be careful, cannot be using what makes Sun Glitters special on other artists (the very dreamy glittery artwork), and I agree. When he flashed this artwork to me I think shed a tear, haha. Absolutely love it. Edited March 25, 2015 by lyst Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide lyst's signature Hide all signatures my choons. Spotify Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/87096-luminate/#findComment-2306815 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Real Human Bean Posted March 25, 2015 Report Share Posted March 25, 2015 Could use a top line but the style and production are nice enough - makes me wanna be a teenager driving round the countryside wiv m'm80s smoking jazzfags. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/87096-luminate/#findComment-2306834 Share on other sites More sharing options...
lyst Posted March 25, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2015 Even after googling still unsure what mm80s are. Jazzfag obviously some uk term for cigarettes, well I know that's what fags are, is that marijuana when you jazz up a fag? Clueless American I'm sorry ha. Thanks for the listen and feedback. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide lyst's signature Hide all signatures my choons. Spotify Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/87096-luminate/#findComment-2306989 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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