Friendzone (demo)

Alright, so I tried rapping :) I really don't know if I pulled it off

The rapping feels a little too aggressive to me, like you're not really "riding" the beat so much, but this kind of rap is not my thing so I'm not your target as far as that goes.

I like the track you're rapping over. nice and mellow. has a nice mix of organic and synth/electronic sounds.

I like the ending in there alot!

The organic sounds which were like strings were best on this song. The rap and the other parts of the song don't hold together.

alright, thanks guys, will have in mind your comments when I'm advancing on this track :) I hear a lot of potential in it but I'm aware it needs work yeah. maybe today :)

First link doesn't work anymore, here's the new one - and I used some of your suggestions, Chartreuse, thanks! I think this works much better now