Aniuk - My little electronic beginnings

Wonder what you all think. I'd love some criticism, I'm horrible at judging my own music. I think I've made 5 or 6 tracks so far? Yeah that's about right I think. All help is appreciated!

Great tunes! I found that with your music there was nice space between the elements - I enjoyed every hit. The interplay of fast/slow within the rhythms were to my taste, reminded me of nothing I ever heard before to be honest, maybe a tad of thom yorke's eraser stuff (no offense intended). I also felt that your tracks, though minimal, which I'm sure is intentional - could be expanded upon, I know there's a couple there that aren't finished. For me the ambience is great, I wouldn't change it. The little melodies are fitting of the striped down beats, to be honest I guess one could always go more in to detail, like maybe, zooming in and making every bar slightly different than the previous - but then that difference would increase as the bars progressed(?) hope that makes some sense(?) I'm don't know what your workflow is like so. All in all, mate I remember my first few tracks, and they weren't this pretty :-) keep at it! Btw the track art on your soundcloud was very fitting of the music, nice stuff

  On 5/7/2015 at 6:28 PM, sine nomine said:

Great tunes! I found that with your music there was nice space between the elements - I enjoyed every hit. The interplay of fast/slow within the rhythms were to my taste, reminded me of nothing I ever heard before to be honest, maybe a tad of thom yorke's eraser stuff (no offense intended). I also felt that your tracks, though minimal, which I'm sure is intentional - could be expanded upon, I know there's a couple there that aren't finished. For me the ambience is great, I wouldn't change it. The little melodies are fitting of the striped down beats, to be honest I guess one could always go more in to detail, like maybe, zooming in and making every bar slightly different than the previous - but then that difference would increase as the bars progressed(?) hope that makes some sense(?) I'm don't know what your workflow is like so. All in all, mate I remember my first few tracks, and they weren't this pretty :-) keep at it! Btw the track art on your soundcloud was very fitting of the music, nice stuff

Thanks man! Yeah I should definitely add some more variety to the tracks, I'll just do that with the upcoming experiments though. Eraser is great, I don't mind that comment at all, haha. I'm using Renoise so I should be more than able to add some more details into it, seems like loops at times and I really don't like that aspect of it.