Nord Lead / Max jam?

New way of working... Feedback welcome!
I think it's pretty serious

https://soundcloud.com/subsea/may12jamexcerpt

Definitely feels like a jam, working out some ideas...that said, there's some good ideas in there! Enjoyed the main 'drums' and how the melody kind of bounced about but built up towards the end. Could maybe be edited down to a nice little track, or would be a great place to work from and tweak further. But to my ears it's not 'done' yet. Keep at it :)

Cheers!
Yeah it's a snippet from about an hour of just mangling, my idea is to cut it up into loops and arrange something / add stuff etc. Thought it was worth sharing in this form though, thanks for listening!

starts picking up/becoming more interesting to my ears around 2:55 when that melody comes in, then just after that when it kinda smears into an atmospheric wash. the noise loop type stuff is good but i feel like it takes too long for the other things to come in. of course like you said its a jam, plus there are a lot of people who are into noise so its all a matter of opinion anyway.