Guest 2080one Posted May 29, 2015 Report Share Posted May 29, 2015 https://soundcloud.com/clavicul/dont-give-up Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/87715-quixotic/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psychotronic Posted May 29, 2015 Report Share Posted May 29, 2015 This track should imho have started from 03:50 and follow the then presented road down into something wild. The way it is it feels like an excerpt from a jam. That is fine too, but it has potential for much more. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Psychotronic's signature Hide all signatures (シ)// Reject all ambition to center yourself and find intuition. >> Bandcamp | Homepage | electronicattack.de | Newest shizzle Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/87715-quixotic/#findComment-2329189 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted May 31, 2015 Report Share Posted May 31, 2015 On 5/29/2015 at 8:59 PM, Psychotronic said: This track should imho have started from 03:50 and follow the then presented road down into something wild. The way it is it feels like an excerpt from a jam. That is fine too, but it has potential for much more. I agree 100%. It could use some rearranging so it builds up instead of just starting full on. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/87715-quixotic/#findComment-2329867 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 2080one Posted June 2, 2015 Report Share Posted June 2, 2015 Sound advice, guys. Thanks. I rearranged it. Took a bit of work to figure out the order since I composed it the other way, but linearly I think it makes more now. Before I was thinking that listeners tend to be pretty ADD, so I wanted to hit them full on first. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/87715-quixotic/#findComment-2330446 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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