quixotic

https://soundcloud.com/clavicul/dont-give-up

This track should imho have started from 03:50 and follow the then presented road down into something wild. The way it is it feels like an excerpt from a jam. That is fine too, but it has potential for much more.

  On 5/29/2015 at 8:59 PM, Psychotronic said:

This track should imho have started from 03:50 and follow the then presented road down into something wild. The way it is it feels like an excerpt from a jam. That is fine too, but it has potential for much more.

I agree 100%. It could use some rearranging so it builds up instead of just starting full on.

Sound advice, guys. Thanks. I rearranged it. Took a bit of work to figure out the order since I composed it the other way, but linearly I think it makes more now. Before I was thinking that listeners tend to be pretty ADD, so I wanted to hit them full on first.