qloo - squirt olympix

spent a good while on this ... its pretty odd, hope someone likes it :)

:)

I like the melody. The entire song structure seems too random for me personally and the glitches need to be more abstract and varried. You might be adding too many elements for the feel that you're going for or perhaps you need a lot more with much more modulations and changes. Right now it seems somewhat in the middle which isn't good because usually good art has a lot of contrast. I hope that helps

Everything is planned and deliberate but cheers for listening anywho !

funny feeling of time in this track, the melody reminds me of messing around with an arpeggio on a synth but changing the parameters which restarts the arpeggio. It'd be nice to have more high frequency content, maybe turn up the drums a bit. The programming on the drums sounds nice but sometimes I can barely hear it so it ends up feeling more like a texture than drums. really cool glitchy voices near the end, percussive. would have been nice if you explored those voices more thoroughly

  On 7/14/2015 at 10:26 PM, Danny O Flannagin said:

funny feeling of time in this track, the melody reminds me of messing around with an arpeggio on a synth but changing the parameters which restarts the arpeggio. It'd be nice to have more high frequency content, maybe turn up the drums a bit. The programming on the drums sounds nice but sometimes I can barely hear it so it ends up feeling more like a texture than drums. really cool glitchy voices near the end, percussive. would have been nice if you explored those voices more thoroughly

Thanks for taking the time . You've definitely addressed some of the issues i seem to 'struggle' with, with the bit about high freqs but i really like stuff to sound like its underwater so thats part of it, but yeah i get that comment a lot so i should probably change it up a bit :) :) - cheers for saying the other stuff too - i tried to layer the drums to make it appear more like texture so thats great ha! thanks