SMEAR

Interesting sounds, reminds of John Frusciante if he was trapped in a k-hole.

Haha, I'll be honest I've listened to this a few times and I don't know what you were going for. The sounds are definitely well mixed, but it's as if... they're smeared over each other. :)

Maye it's a good idea to be going for that, but if I were you I'd try going over it again and bringing in more progression to keep interest. It feels as if there is one being set up, but then it kind of just fades away.

thanks for listening