close to us

As life permits, i continue to pull from the emotions and feelings that i derive from it. just finished this song that has given me the output for everything that has entered and exited my body the past few weeks.

https://soundcloud.com/mylamine/mylamine-close-to-us

I would like to edit this and take out that drunk sentence I wrote, haha. Appears I cannot edit it though. =/

This is nice but the drums needs some work I think.

I'd lover the volume on the kick and snare. Maybe choose a brighter snare or a clap instead? Try changing the kick to a short sub kick.

The choirs around the 2.20 mark are barely audible, needs some higher volume.

The synths are what make the track though and they're great!

  On 9/23/2015 at 9:57 AM, zoix said:

This is nice but the drums needs some work I think.

I'd lover the volume on the kick and snare. Maybe choose a brighter snare or a clap instead? Try changing the kick to a short sub kick.

The choirs around the 2.20 mark are barely audible, needs some higher volume.

 

The synths are what make the track though and they're great!

Thanks for the feedback.

The choir is suppose to not be audible, just background noise is all its suppose to be.

Last feedback I got told me to higher the volume of the kick -.- . So it is what it is at this point.