bionicle soda Fresh Time!

i wasn't going to post this here because i sort of don't like the idea that i'm doing this for approval, but fuck it, i like approval and i like this song, so maybe someone else would. figured out some stuff that i like and will expand on later, probably the next time i post something here i'll have more drum beats because it kind of bugs me when a song only has one or two drum things.

https://soundcloud.com/david-cherepov/bionicle-soda-fresh-time-1

I do not approve of this! j/k lol

My only critique is that it sounded too clean, but maybe that's what you were going for.

too clean? i'm not entirely sure what you mean, do you mean mostly sequenced stuff, a lack of reverb. or both? i was going for the lack of reverb stuff because i wanted the squishy beats to be clear, but i wasn't trying to make it sound stale. thanks for the thoughts

for some reason the soundcloud link broke, i'm just going to put the new link here if anyone wanted to see it https://soundcloud.com/david-cherepov/bionicle-soda-fresh-time