thehauntingsoul Posted December 18, 2015 Report Share Posted December 18, 2015 Just discovered how awesome renoise is and made a cool little track, but I feel like it needs a bit of something to wrap it up nicely. Also I'm not sure my mastering abilities are up to par yet either. Used to use reason but I felt it took forever to put a full track together, but with renoise it's really quick and easy. Anyways do you folks have any feedback to help me polish this little baby up? Also there's something unintentionally off with the rhythm and I can't quite figure out what it is. Maybe some of you can figure it out but it feels like it's got an extra few beats at the end of every bar. Either way I like the result but I'm curious what's going on here. Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/3372365/Not%20Quite%20Right.mp3 Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide thehauntingsoul's signature Hide all signatures Last.fm SteamID: Thehauntingsoul My EP Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/89558-i-made-a-tasty-little-diddy-trying-to-figure-out-how-to-polish-it-more/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
hello spiral Posted December 18, 2015 Report Share Posted December 18, 2015 Noice little tune dude, like it a lot. Can imagine it looping over a megadrive game. If you want to beef/polish it up more I'd say add some more texture/freqs to it. Even simple (some would say cynical) stuff like filtering that synth line through some reverb and compression and other effects and then having that slowly fade in during the middle of the track. Maybe syncopate the beat a bit more? Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide hello spiral's signature Hide all signatures https://salaamhelicoid.bandcamp.com/ Reveal hidden contents Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/89558-i-made-a-tasty-little-diddy-trying-to-figure-out-how-to-polish-it-more/#findComment-2402364 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ivan Ooze Posted December 18, 2015 Report Share Posted December 18, 2015 i can't really tell what to change but i wanna play this game Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Ivan Ooze's signature Hide all signatures On 2/26/2015 at 9:39 AM, RupturedSouls said: This drugs makes me feel like I'm on song! On 9/1/2014 at 5:50 PM, StephenG said: I'm hardly a closed minded nun. Remember, I'm on a fucking IDM forum.... an IDM forum.. Think about that for a second before claiming people are closed minded nuns. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/89558-i-made-a-tasty-little-diddy-trying-to-figure-out-how-to-polish-it-more/#findComment-2402368 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hello spiral Posted December 18, 2015 Report Share Posted December 18, 2015 ^ agreed, more pls. Also, get a SC account so we can follow it. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide hello spiral's signature Hide all signatures https://salaamhelicoid.bandcamp.com/ Reveal hidden contents Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/89558-i-made-a-tasty-little-diddy-trying-to-figure-out-how-to-polish-it-more/#findComment-2402375 Share on other sites More sharing options...
delet... Posted December 18, 2015 Report Share Posted December 18, 2015 Where's the track muthafukka? Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures A member of the non sequitairiate. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/89558-i-made-a-tasty-little-diddy-trying-to-figure-out-how-to-polish-it-more/#findComment-2402393 Share on other sites More sharing options...
th555 Posted December 18, 2015 Report Share Posted December 18, 2015 It's in the OP maaaan. Cool track, cool triplets. Bit skweee-ish sound, always like that barebones stuff. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide th555's signature Hide all signatures https://www.youtube.com/user/THkaas/videos https://thisjepisje.bandcamp.com/ https://soundcloud.com/th555 Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/89558-i-made-a-tasty-little-diddy-trying-to-figure-out-how-to-polish-it-more/#findComment-2402534 Share on other sites More sharing options...
delet... Posted December 18, 2015 Report Share Posted December 18, 2015 It's not in the OP for me, but I've got javascript turned off on my tablet. I'll check it out on the PC when I get home then. Also, lol, ios autocorrected PC to apache, they really are tossers. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures A member of the non sequitairiate. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/89558-i-made-a-tasty-little-diddy-trying-to-figure-out-how-to-polish-it-more/#findComment-2402570 Share on other sites More sharing options...
thehauntingsoul Posted December 19, 2015 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 Aww you guyyyyyys! Glad you like the track. It's not up on my SC yet because I want to polish it a bit more first, but if you want to check it out I'm at https://soundcloud.com/ths. Haven't been making music much lately but after discovering and subsequently falling in love with Renoise I imagine I'll get back into this whole shindig a bit more. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide thehauntingsoul's signature Hide all signatures Last.fm SteamID: Thehauntingsoul My EP Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/89558-i-made-a-tasty-little-diddy-trying-to-figure-out-how-to-polish-it-more/#findComment-2402645 Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sponge Wiggler Posted December 19, 2015 Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 some pads would maybe make it feel fuller Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/89558-i-made-a-tasty-little-diddy-trying-to-figure-out-how-to-polish-it-more/#findComment-2402719 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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