Lake Erie

https://soundcloud.com/mylamine/mylamine-lake-erie

seems like a draft but very pretty/chill. i'd like to hear the drums beefed up a little and at some point, laying off that drawn out shaker that slides through other upbeat.

I'd love if it kicked in a bit more after the break around the halfway mark. When the piano chords come back in it'd be great if it evolved a little more. I'd probably extend it another minute, 2 even, and just evolve it a little more with the chords and/or the drums. Nice stuff.

Thanks yea. The idea of this song was to do something different. The rest of my songs are 3-4+ minute range, I try to add a lot of breaks, stops, start ups, etc. This time just wanted to make a condensed track. So the timeframe on the song is intentional. Also, was planning on releasing this track with very very minimal drums, but then decided to add some texture. So the drums are more than I wanted in the first place.

QQQ you are pretty much suggesting to make the song what it is not. Longer, more drums, and more chords. Just not what was intended with this song.

But thanks for the thoughts and the listens.