the crying seal prostates itself before the altar of the magical whale

this is a thing that i spent a long time on yesterday, then tried to improve today, i have a habit of slathering reverb on everything to try to make it sound nicer to me, but just makes it muddy, so i decided to use very little reverb on this

https://soundcloud.com/david-cherepov/the-crying-seal-prostates-itself-before-the-altar-of-the-magical-whale-version-2

This is too short...it needs to go somewhere else. Also I think you meant "prostrates" :D

thanks for the feedback!

you're right about the spelling, i thought i corrected it before, but i'm too stupid to check a dictionary

my justification for making songs short is that if i make them too long, i run the risk of repeating myself, and i dislike when people repeat themselves too much in a song.

i'm sober almost entirely all the time, as until a month ago, i was against the idea of getting drunk, and the song sounded good to me when i was sober. Now that i'm somewhat drunk, i can agree that it feels too short. i sort of want to get a SC pro account again so i can replace the previous version, but i dunno if spending 7 dollars a month is worth it just to upload updated versions of songs. maybe i'll just extend it either way.

Like it! Always loved that kinda lowbit drums/beats.. :)

Quite excellent actually, but agree with the sentiment that it's too short. I think you could add other variables that were changing throughout that would make sure it wasn't repeating, like you said you had a fear of. What about a top melody over all of it? That could change here and there, extend the song by a minute or two.

Anyways, excellent work one way or another. =)