PL92O1337000/PL92O1337010

https://soundcloud.com/pl92o1337000/pl92o1337010

nice atmosphere and textures, needs some development on the rhythm and groove front imo

  On 8/9/2016 at 3:31 PM, BCM said:

nice atmosphere and textures, needs some development on the rhythm and groove front imo

I agree with BCM 100%. Also, the kick and the rest of the drums/glitchy stuff kinda sticks out in a weird way. I think the kick needs to be a bit more defined - maybe sidechain it a bit to the pad and/or the bass. I can't tell if the bass is part of the pad or what? Anyway, I hope you know what I mean ;)

  On 8/9/2016 at 3:31 PM, BCM said:

nice atmosphere and textures, needs some development on the rhythm and groove front imo

First thing I attempted since like 2010.

It was aimed at colundi, as the topic description said, but I can't see it anymore, so.. "failed colundi attempt"

I wasn't trying to make it groove, but after some time I now can see few things I can develop because it gets boring.. probably I won't, because every time I try to change something I change so much it turns out as completely different track.. some of it was also live recorded so couldn't even make it the same..

  On 8/10/2016 at 9:11 PM, Squee said:

 

  On 8/9/2016 at 3:31 PM, BCM said:

nice atmosphere and textures, needs some development on the rhythm and groove front imo

 

I agree with BCM 100%. Also, the kick and the rest of the drums/glitchy stuff kinda sticks out in a weird way. I think the kick needs to be a bit more defined - maybe sidechain it a bit to the pad and/or the bass. I can't tell if the bass is part of the pad or what? Anyway, I hope you know what I mean ;)

 

Glitchy stuff is not present in the source, it was made by SC compression. I don't think I will sidechain it if I sit on it again, I actually like that weird dissociated way. Bass is just a looped sample with some effects on it, not part of the pad.

Thank You guys for Your input.

  On 8/12/2016 at 4:58 PM, 4d0lf said:

Glitchy stuff is not present in the source, it was made by SC compression

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Nice drone track. I disagree with my previous posters about the kick drum. You should leave it that weak because it reminds me on a ticking clock, makes the track remain an ambient track. I like the sometimes shrill pads. But I think you should definitely work on the bassline: it's boring in my opinion. You could also add some more details - but all in all the track is not too bad with some interesting elements and melody