QQQ Posted August 8, 2016 Report Share Posted August 8, 2016 https://soundcloud.com/charlesxyz/on-saturn thanks to anyone listening! any feedback appreciated. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/91246-on-saturn/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted August 9, 2016 Report Share Posted August 9, 2016 The production is great (though I think the vinyl crackle is too loud and doesn't really fit the very digital sound of the track). The drums are a bit too midi-ish for my taste, but that's just me :) By the way, you're hitting an A or something near the beginning (around 0:07) that really tonally is off. It might be on purpose but I just thought I'd let you know. Also, the lead seems to be hitting some strange notes here and there. Again, it might be on purpose. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/91246-on-saturn/#findComment-2471135 Share on other sites More sharing options...
QQQ Posted August 9, 2016 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2016 i have a hard time with mixing and such so i'm happy you dug the production! do you mean the chords or the bassline is off at 0:07? trying to listen out for it. thanks for the comments, Squee. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/91246-on-saturn/#findComment-2471146 Share on other sites More sharing options...
dingformung Posted August 15, 2016 Report Share Posted August 15, 2016 I like that synth from the beginning that ends around 1:00 and comes back later, but I find the melody that starts around 0:42 almost a little bit too - well - obvious, I'd have made it more quiet I think, with some reverb, but that's just me. In my ears no note is really off, but that might be because of my bad ears :) I agree about the drums though, they could be louder, more distorted or otherwisely tweaked. But all in all it's a nice little ambient track Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide dingformung's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/91246-on-saturn/#findComment-2472295 Share on other sites More sharing options...
QrQ Posted August 18, 2016 Report Share Posted August 18, 2016 Nice little vibe. I like the melodic work and the synths. I think the drums could be more interesting. The lead synth reminded me of something? Maybe the intro music for look around you? Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/91246-on-saturn/#findComment-2473319 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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