deep aqua

gah. had a lot of fun with this one. <3 all.

https://soundcloud.com/mylamine/mylamine-deep-aqua

digging this.

crit wise the drums could do with slightly less presence in the mix imo, mainly the snare near the beginning.

followed you on SC after this one. nice work!

thanks for a pleasant journey. it's got some of a trance vibe I dig.

Thanks guys.

Yea QQQ, i noticed that a little bit.  I work with two sets of headphones mainly, and compare and contrast those.  Then if I try a third set, it sounds different and i can hear different parts of the mix.   Just some crap I have to deal with with not having a great recording equipment.

  On 11/8/2016 at 4:53 PM, QQQ said:

digging this.

 

crit wise the drums could do with slightly less presence in the mix imo, mainly the snare near the beginning.

 

followed you on SC after this one. nice work!

So I did a whole lot of editing on this track.  Tried to kick down that snare a bit.  But mainly changed up the vocals almost completely.  Just wasn't feeling them, especially after some feedback. I think the track fits now.  Still is somewhat offputting and that's my style that will never change.

https://soundcloud.com/mylamine/mylamine-deep-aqua

There are some really nice vibes to this. I love that pad that comes in right before the minute mark, really fills out the spectrum of the track nicely. Could get lost in this. A little variation note-wise on your lead melody might help space everything out a bit too, it can feel busy after so many loops. But I also like it so who knows.

  On 11/12/2016 at 8:11 AM, ladalaika said:

There are some really nice vibes to this. I love that pad that comes in right before the minute mark, really fills out the spectrum of the track nicely. Could get lost in this. A little variation note-wise on your lead melody might help space everything out a bit too, it can feel busy after so many loops. But I also like it so who knows.

I feel you on that.  I love that evolution of one melody though, additions, subtractions.  Electronic music to me is all about getting hypnotized.