zoix Posted December 27, 2016 Report Share Posted December 27, 2016 (edited) Hey guys, Sorry for the shitty thread name. This is something I've been working on. What do you think? Too much bass? Is the kick volume too loud in the mix? Are for example the FX too centered, should I pan them more in the mix? [sc5]299793618[/sc5] Edited December 27, 2016 by zoix Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/92303-feedback/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
qualitycontrol Posted December 28, 2016 Report Share Posted December 28, 2016 I like the tune, the only thing I would suggest is trying some different snare sounds.. ?? Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/92303-feedback/#findComment-2513576 Share on other sites More sharing options...
dingformung Posted December 30, 2016 Report Share Posted December 30, 2016 (edited) Don't think that the kick is too loud, I even think it could be more present in the mix. You could try to group the bass and the kick and compress them and/or EQ them (raise the kick - say - between 90Hz and 110Hz while lowering the bass in that very section, just as an example). I like the dark sounds that you use and the spatiality edit: the ending seems a little abrupt, you could work that out a little bit Edited December 30, 2016 by darreichungsform Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide dingformung's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/92303-feedback/#findComment-2513796 Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoix Posted December 30, 2016 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2016 Hey guys thanks your responses. qualitycontrol: Thank you for your opinion, I might try adding and removing different snare sounds throughout the track. darreichungsform: Excellent advice, will look at the ending. I have actually done that with the EQ but will look at making the kick more present by fiddling with the volume and the EQ. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/92303-feedback/#findComment-2513837 Share on other sites More sharing options...
nauticaloperator Posted January 16, 2017 Report Share Posted January 16, 2017 On 12/27/2016 at 7:28 PM, zoix said: Hey guys, Sorry for the shitty thread name. This is something I've been working on. What do you think? Too much bass? Is the kick volume too loud in the mix? Are for example the FX too centered, should I pan them more in the mix? [sc5]299793618[/sc5] Awesome vibes, nice work. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide nauticaloperator's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/92303-feedback/#findComment-2518270 Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoix Posted January 18, 2017 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2017 On 1/16/2017 at 7:24 PM, nauticaloperator said: On 12/27/2016 at 7:28 PM, zoix said: Hey guys, Sorry for the shitty thread name. This is something I've been working on. What do you think? Too much bass? Is the kick volume too loud in the mix? Are for example the FX too centered, should I pan them more in the mix? [sc5]299793618[/sc5] Awesome vibes, nice work. Thanks mate! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/92303-feedback/#findComment-2518679 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny O Flannagin Posted January 20, 2017 Report Share Posted January 20, 2017 I like the melodic content but I'd probably change or even completely remove all the drum sounds. Try more industrial sounds, like chains/presses, I think that would really work for this track Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Danny O Flannagin's signature Hide all signatures https://nimajeb.bandcamp.com/music https://www.instagram.com/bengastphoto/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/92303-feedback/#findComment-2519314 Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoix Posted January 22, 2017 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2017 On 1/20/2017 at 3:12 AM, Danny O Flannagin said: I like the melodic content but I'd probably change or even completely remove all the drum sounds. Try more industrial sounds, like chains/presses, I think that would really work for this track Thanks! I might try that but am pretty content with the percussion content. Getting inspired to make another track with chain sounds instead of hihats though :p Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/92303-feedback/#findComment-2520055 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny O Flannagin Posted January 22, 2017 Report Share Posted January 22, 2017 Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Danny O Flannagin's signature Hide all signatures https://nimajeb.bandcamp.com/music https://www.instagram.com/bengastphoto/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/92303-feedback/#findComment-2520060 Share on other sites More sharing options...
dingformung Posted January 22, 2017 Report Share Posted January 22, 2017 One more advice. Don't ever listen to ambient producers! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide dingformung's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/92303-feedback/#findComment-2520062 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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