chipbreak track

something I made in renoise, all melodies are from single cycle waveforms and native dsp.

https://soundcloud.com/maelstrom2000/foretime

any feedback is appreciated 

Nice track. Just enough breaks to give the ear a rest before the beat craziness resumes. Makes me want to play video games. I like the crunchiness you threw on the beats.

I like this.  great pacing, nice sounds.  Cool that you did it all in reaper.  I've been wanting to learn that one.  How long did it take ya to finish something like this?

Suggestions according to my tastes.

-intro is a little long without sound variation 

-could use a couple more melodic elements to round it all out

I did this track in renoise, not reaper. it took 2 days from start to finish. i love writing chiptune/chipbreak cause i tend to not worry about the sound quality and can focus more on the actual arrangement.

i agree it needs more variation in parts. i should cut the intro, the length does seem a bit unnecessary...

thanks for the feedback (:

Sorry, "Reaper, Reason, Renoise"  get's me wires crossed.  Cheers