Clio

Really nice chill track. I'd like to hear a longer version. I like your use of pauses/breaks in the beat and the melody is quite lovely. 

lush downtempo track. the keys and Melody are the strongest aspects. the kick is too compressed in my opinion, the high end pop is a little harsh.

paul, QQQ, thanks for feedback

  On 11/13/2017 at 4:32 PM, QQQ said:

the kick is too compressed in my opinion

agree. right you are

  On 11/13/2017 at 4:32 PM, QQQ said:

lush downtempo track. the keys and Melody are the strongest aspects. the kick is too compressed in my opinion, the high end pop is a little harsh.

Agreed on the kick.

Otherwise this got me feeling mellow and content, good job!

Quite bliss  .

Yeah as was said high end of the kick is too 'pop'py. The clap seems a bit featherweight, amplify it or boost the midrange on it. Composition is nice and floaty, some kinda swirly granular thing could be flying around in the background maybe? The production seems a bit dry to me and I'd want to hear some unexpected events transpire in and around the main melodic motif.