Posted here a few days ago and have taken your feedback. New track: Turquoise Revolutions

A few of you gave me some useful feedback the other day so here is my updated track :)

Nice work with the melody in the beginning. I feel like there has to happen something more in the last part though. The percussion is cool but it could be a bridge to a final big part which drives the track home. As it is now the track just peters out in end.