acid house piano melodic

https://soundcloud.com/vibeorigin/vibe-origin-sour-candy

Hey I love your melodies here and nice 303 lines.

Great vibe.

My only suggestion is to put some more energy/volume/compression or whatever behind your rhythms.

That'd be nice to my ears but that's just me. 

^exactly this.

what gemini said! those beats need to be beefed up! nice melodies/harmonies undoubtedly... also, i miss some more minimal parts, mute that spacey/haunting melodie once in a while...

I might try to do a slight short reverb on those drums to make them more present. It seems that the volume isn't too low, but maybe it is due to my monitoring setup.

I did some compression and a slight reverb on the drums.

  On 2/12/2018 at 9:36 PM, Vibe Origin said:

I did some compression and a slight reverb on the drums.

waaaaaaay better!!! good job :thumbsup:

i stick by what i said in my first post, make some variation by muting some of the piano left hand keys and bass sounds once in a while, to make it emptier and spacey and then when you put them back in, boooom, kind of a wait for the drop moment if you know what i mean... ;) e.g. just beats and 303, and while you're at it, trow some cowbells and toms on those emptier moments...

lovely song!!!

has this really lovely//earnest springtime pop vibe right off the bat that sticks around throughout

feeling like maybe the reverb's kinda high in the mix? this is something i've run into a lot while i'm making trax so that is my suspicion. imo if everything was a bit starker the percy elements would thump a bit more & it'd be banging

echoing what the others said essentially! structurally a very nice little piece

Agreed ^^^

Lovely stuff just needs beef.