UnaPeaks Posted January 8, 2019 Report Share Posted January 8, 2019 Hey, new to this forum so hello everyone! Wanted a space to share some of my music, get some advice, and listen to some other peoples. Here's a track I've been working on recently. Let me know your thoughts! Particularly would like some feedback about how its mixed. cheers! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
worms Posted January 8, 2019 Report Share Posted January 8, 2019 It’s like a track that evokes childhood, then the david icke sample kicks in. Your beats demonstrate high levels of choppage. Mixing sounds fine but I’m just listening via ipad. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide worms's signature Hide all signatures http://grantfromeastenders.bandcamp.com uk acid house for free streaming / download Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2690305 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBro Posted January 8, 2019 Report Share Posted January 8, 2019 Love the beats. Music wasn't totally my bag tbh but that said it works well. Like Worms says the mix sounds good. I preferred the 1st part I think. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2690320 Share on other sites More sharing options...
eryngi Posted January 8, 2019 Report Share Posted January 8, 2019 this is sweet. IMO the voice sample kinda detracts from it.. like it's a bit waffley? also doesn't quite sit well in the mix somehow.. apart from that, sounds pretty good! understated and quite dry sounding. it's got a great flow to it except the twinkly little musicbox riff throughout could maybe do with more variation - it has a slight awkwardness to its rhythm, which i like, but it'd be cool if it shifted around more.. a lot of the bass has gone away in the second part? i like how there's a quiet clicky sound that sounds like it's part of the musicbox sample(gives the impression of mechanical noise lile, a glockenspiel bar moving slightly), gives it an almost live recording vibe Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2690345 Share on other sites More sharing options...
UnaPeaks Posted January 8, 2019 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2019 On 1/8/2019 at 9:45 PM, wobbegongs said: this is sweet. IMO the voice sample kinda detracts from it.. like it's a bit waffley? also doesn't quite sit well in the mix somehow.. apart from that, sounds pretty good! understated and quite dry sounding. it's got a great flow to it except the twinkly little musicbox riff throughout could maybe do with more variation - it has a slight awkwardness to its rhythm, which i like, but it'd be cool if it shifted around more.. a lot of the bass has gone away in the second part? i like how there's a quiet clicky sound that sounds like it's part of the musicbox sample(gives the impression of mechanical noise lile, a glockenspiel bar moving slightly), gives it an almost live recording vibe this was all really helpful! interesting point about the vocal sample, it found its way in there because it felt like it was missing something and i was struggling to work in another melodic element, but maybe i'll eventually figure something out. the bass has reverb in the first part, and then no reverb in the second part, maybe that caused a volume drop. didn't notice that at all! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2690385 Share on other sites More sharing options...
dingformung Posted January 9, 2019 Report Share Posted January 9, 2019 (edited) very nice reverbs on the voice. I think the voice makes this track really interesting. the drums and everything else sound really good, too. Very full bodied mix with not too much treble (as you often hear in that genre). But the voice sample really makes it interesting and stand out. I very much enjoyed this track Edited January 9, 2019 by darreichungsform Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide dingformung's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2690387 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dpek Posted January 9, 2019 Report Share Posted January 9, 2019 I really like this! Followed Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Dpek's signature Hide all signatures https://blazgracar.com Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2690449 Share on other sites More sharing options...
UnaPeaks Posted January 10, 2019 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2019 On 1/9/2019 at 12:03 AM, darreichungsform said: very nice reverbs on the voice. I think the voice makes this track really interesting. the drums and everything else sound really good, too. Very full bodied mix with not too much treble (as you often hear in that genre). But the voice sample really makes it interesting and stand out. I very much enjoyed this track thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2690632 Share on other sites More sharing options...
UnaPeaks Posted March 22, 2019 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2019 a new one! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2705875 Share on other sites More sharing options...
QQQ Posted March 27, 2019 Report Share Posted March 27, 2019 i think the speech sample in the first track stands out a bit because the reverb used on it is so different to the reverb on the other elements, could do with tweeking to fit better. track is good though. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2706838 Share on other sites More sharing options...
UnaPeaks Posted March 27, 2019 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2019 Yeah there's different reverbs on everything. Some consistency might be a good idea! Thanks for listening Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2706952 Share on other sites More sharing options...
cooliofranco Posted March 31, 2019 Report Share Posted March 31, 2019 i really enjoyed this. kinda reminds me of some floating points stuff. On 1/8/2019 at 6:42 PM, UnaPeaks said: Hey, new to this forum so hello everyone! Wanted a space to share some of my music, get some advice, and listen to some other peoples. Here's a track I've been working on recently. Let me know your thoughts! Particularly would like some feedback about how its mixed. cheers! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide cooliofranco's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2707812 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattikarkk Posted March 31, 2019 Report Share Posted March 31, 2019 I like your production. Good job. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2707821 Share on other sites More sharing options...
cooliofranco Posted April 4, 2019 Report Share Posted April 4, 2019 listening again. really great track. On 3/31/2019 at 1:55 PM, mammalsolidarity said: i really enjoyed this. kinda reminds me of some floating points stuff. On 1/8/2019 at 6:42 PM, UnaPeaks said: Hey, new to this forum so hello everyone! Wanted a space to share some of my music, get some advice, and listen to some other peoples. Here's a track I've been working on recently. Let me know your thoughts! Particularly would like some feedback about how its mixed. cheers! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide cooliofranco's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2708740 Share on other sites More sharing options...
UnaPeaks Posted April 4, 2019 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2019 On 4/4/2019 at 1:03 PM, mammalsolidarity said: listening again. really great track. On 3/31/2019 at 1:55 PM, mammalsolidarity said: i really enjoyed this. kinda reminds me of some floating points stuff. On 1/8/2019 at 6:42 PM, UnaPeaks said: Hey, new to this forum so hello everyone! Wanted a space to share some of my music, get some advice, and listen to some other peoples. Here's a track I've been working on recently. Let me know your thoughts! Particularly would like some feedback about how its mixed. https://soundcloud.com/unapeaks/blvr cheers! Thank you for listening! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2708816 Share on other sites More sharing options...
UnaPeaks Posted May 22, 2019 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2019 (edited) Here's a new track I've been working on! Edited May 22, 2019 by UnaPeaks Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2719413 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mozex Posted May 23, 2019 Report Share Posted May 23, 2019 Both tracks sound good! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2719468 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plarkreluke Banloboh Posted May 25, 2019 Report Share Posted May 25, 2019 Boxy kick drums meld with the melodic bassline reminds me of the childlike wonder of Flim – the sparkle of the xylophone is a great choice to go along with this nostalgic melancholy. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2719866 Share on other sites More sharing options...
UnaPeaks Posted May 26, 2019 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2019 On 5/25/2019 at 3:39 PM, webby said: Boxy kick drums meld with the melodic bassline reminds me of the childlike wonder of Flim – the sparkle of the xylophone is a great choice to go along with this nostalgic melancholy. Cheers man! Flim was an influence for this so really nice to hear that Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/96311-una-peaks/#findComment-2719973 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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