Any ideas?

Does anyone have any ideas on what i can do with this track (to make it better)?

Thank you

Chris

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Well, I like it a lot to start with mate - really intricate, I love the little beat squiggles, and the reverb-y noises.....er, could possibly do with a bassline, just a simple sine wave number or something...maybe some nice tinkly synth lines working their way around the track. Some weird voice sample or something? I dunno, it doesn't need an awful lot IMO. Very nice work.

Thank you for your comments.

It's made up of samples of me drawing/copying a Kandinsky picture so i don't really want to use any synthesisers but i could make a bassline out of a sample i suppose.

This is very cool. I'm sorry I don't have any suggestions for you.

Man this concrete at the beginning is shit-tons better than all the academic fools up at Uni. I like how the 'beat' kind of just creeps in out of all the initial madness at the beginning. Was a tad bit stretched-out feeling towards the end middle though, so I see where you're coming here and asking for help. My suggestion would be to maybe put some really long distorted way in the background maybe even semi-tonal kind of stuff, ie: like not exactly pitches, but you know, not just noise. meh, don't know if I got my idea across on that, but I do like all the timbres and drum work on there. A tad autechre-esque, but different enough to pull it off well.

Production on this is top notch, if youd told me this was a new autechre remix id honestly have not known the difference, whether or not that works in it's favour though is anyones guess.

this track is perfect as it is. an exercise in form over function. much respect