wAgAwAgA - Pheminex

  Mark Fox said:

This is a good cutup; if you explained this song to me I'd suspect the song was quite bad, but your skill makes it believable and humorous. English gentelman crackheads indeed.

 

As far as grittier/heavier or whatever I don't think it's necessary, the song has enough elements to hold together for what it is, but a remix with a rougher take might work too.

 

The drums are fantastic.

Any other stuff?

nice and concise, i may pass it on to a friend to tear to bits. he writes breakcore-ish so im sure he could double time it and pull it to pieces.

As far as other tracks go, ive got loads. but ive only just started posting on here and im trying to stop myself from flooding the forums.

i wanna post this track i started last night cos its had me dancing round the room and shaking my house to pieces with the bass. but ill save it til its finished. ill link a couple of older ones at the bottom.

bare in mind, the production is shoddy on these older tracks ;)

obz cure:

tshirt acid fetish: ignore the daft intro.

mlti mlodu:

cheers

waga

this track has a lot to it, but i don't think it's finished. it is very lush but still feels a little incomplete. the glitch factor could use some improvement. drums are good.

obz cure

Nice n' lazy 5/4 funky make me weep,

Staggering the beat makes me tumble out my seat,

Noises like elastic snap and stretch back,

This here producer has got THE KNACK.

t-shirt acid fetish

Nobody asked if I wanted EXTRA CHEESE,

This here producer must have been smoking trees.

mlti mlodu

A slick effort with no need for enhancing,

I can picture myself TANTRUM DANCING.

  AlexPallas said:

this track has a lot to it, but i don't think it's finished. it is very lush but still feels a little incomplete. the glitch factor could use some improvement. drums are good.

I didnt want the track to over glitch to the point where it was out of time just for the sake of extra weirdness. all the tweaks were meant to be on the mark. although theres a places in the section before it drops out to the straight hiphop at the end which i keep humming new ideas for so i may go back and do more.

  Wrong Answer said:

obz cure

Nice n' lazy 5/4 funky make me weep,

Staggering the beat makes me tumble out my seat,

Noises like elastic snap and stretch back,

This here producer has got THE KNACK.

 

t-shirt acid fetish

Nobody asked if I wanted EXTRA CHEESE,

This here producer must have been smoking trees.

 

mlti mlodu

A slick effort with no need for enhancing,

I can picture myself TANTRUM DANCING.

HAHA!

what a fuckin random response that is :) rhyming reviews from the wrong answer.

thanks m8 glad u enjoyed them.

you get an A

i feel less like i'm in the midst of amateurs