The daily Haiku thread

drunk
only feel good now
only now.

  On 3/22/2013 at 7:22 PM, TRiP said:

 

  On 3/22/2013 at 6:06 PM, chimera slot mom said:

Haiku count morae, not syllables. There are also many haiku that don't follow the 5-7-5 system.

 

swiiisssh

car drives by

walking all alone

 

ya ya - aware of this, however it seems for the general ease of things following the hugely wrong English method is best

 

besides, Haiku's are a distinctively Japanese thing. Its silly to think we can do them exactly the same except translated to English. So why not just try the English method, and make it a whole new thing with the same basic principles of simplifying yet maintaining beauty and wonder. .

count the morae, count the syllables, it won't matter. as long as you are not thinking like a child, you will not be able to construct a haiku.

  On 3/23/2013 at 3:33 AM, chimera slot mom said:

 

  On 3/22/2013 at 7:22 PM, TRiP said:

 

  On 3/22/2013 at 6:06 PM, chimera slot mom said:

Haiku count morae, not syllables. There are also many haiku that don't follow the 5-7-5 system.

 

swiiisssh

car drives by

walking all alone

 

ya ya - aware of this, however it seems for the general ease of things following the hugely wrong English method is best

 

besides, Haiku's are a distinctively Japanese thing. Its silly to think we can do them exactly the same except translated to English. So why not just try the English method, and make it a whole new thing with the same basic principles of simplifying yet maintaining beauty and wonder. .

 

count the morae, count the syllables, it won't matter. as long as you are not thinking like a child, you will not be able to construct a haiku.

what'chu talkin' bout? please elaborate.

dim morning heavy chest,

wondering thoughts and feelings,

what will today bring

Johan Sebasti

an Bach, Cello Suite Number

One in G Major

Justin timberlake

under the sign of evil

i pierced your tits

I procrastinate

go on watmm one refresh

again fuck this shit

The house was messy

Spent all day cleaning it up

A cold beer is due

  On 3/23/2013 at 2:25 PM, TRiP said:

 

  On 3/23/2013 at 3:33 AM, chimera slot mom said:

 

  On 3/22/2013 at 7:22 PM, TRiP said:

 

  On 3/22/2013 at 6:06 PM, chimera slot mom said:

Haiku count morae, not syllables. There are also many haiku that don't follow the 5-7-5 system.

 

swiiisssh

car drives by

walking all alone

 

ya ya - aware of this, however it seems for the general ease of things following the hugely wrong English method is best

 

besides, Haiku's are a distinctively Japanese thing. Its silly to think we can do them exactly the same except translated to English. So why not just try the English method, and make it a whole new thing with the same basic principles of simplifying yet maintaining beauty and wonder. .

 

count the morae, count the syllables, it won't matter. as long as you are not thinking like a child, you will not be able to construct a haiku.

 

what'chu talkin' bout? please elaborate.

 

dim morning heavy chest,

wondering thoughts and feelings,

what will today bring

 

 

I meant that the spirit of the haiku is much more important than the syllable count. It's very difficult to describe what that spirit is exactly, but I like alan watts description that it is supposed to be as simple and direct as if a little child were to describe reality, and that's where it's beauty comes from.

snow falls through March

springtime without spring

Headache

shot guns yesterday

had a big shit this morning

in america

I read your copy

Whilst it snowed bleakly outside.

It sucked, you're a hack

What burns may be gone

What fluids may leak out again

Fuck Gonorrhea

Dash into toilet

escapism to shit pressure

is his ass singing?

routing sound around
waves, pulses, bombardment
disdained silence

  On 3/24/2013 at 4:56 AM, Rabid said:

 

Holding my penis

It gets bigger and bigger

Ejaculation.

lal lel lil lol lul

lal lel lil lol lul lyl l0l

lal lel lil lol lul

I wrote this Haiku

And then changed my avatar

Life changing moment

another one taken
mourning the past, blessing the future
white snow disappears

I turn on the synth
MIDI never is working
defective cables

When using midi

check that it's the right channel

and in and out ports

Sun Tzu once said

Anger is my friend

One hundred motive points

Goes in Altoids tin

heading home for now
acknowledging past present

faith for the future

I have just found out

That GG Allin's name was

Jesus fucking Christ

Rush, adaptation,

and backwardness of the act,

and smoking hedgehogs

across empty space

rogue planets lonely journey

it's most IDM